The Freshman Fifteen is a new story at the BE Story Club by Kris P. Kreme. It’s well-written and the breast growth descriptions are very good. Here’s an excerpt:
That was when it suddenly occurred to Melinda. Her chest had felt tight. And it wasn’t just anxiety from her dreams. It was a real feeling of tightness. She looked down, noticing how the normally slightly loose shirt she was wearing looked form fitted, her bulging young breasts pressing out.
“Um… well yeah, I guess my tops have been a bit tighter.”
Holly laughed. “Well there you go, no wonder I hadn’t noticed. It certainly isn’t the most unsightly place to gain a few pounds.”
The blonde walked off, going back to her studying as Melinda simply focused on the word she had used. Unsightly, she thought. That had been the word in the ad. Prevent unsightly weight gain. It made sense in a twisted sort of way. The Body Assist Nutrients were distributing the weight gain to less unsightly places.
But seriously she thought, that was two and a half pounds of boob each. She couldn’t keep gaining that much or else by the time she went home for the holidays she would look like some cartoon porn slut.
Melinda spent the day weighing her options, quite literally. She could stop the vitamins, gain weight more normally and prove her brother right, or she could keep going and simply hope it was a fluke, that nothing like what had already happened would continue.
By the next day when she was eating lunch, Melinda had decided to stick with the vitamins. They may be a bit misrepresented but they were keeping her in as good if not better shape than before she ever got them.
Over the following weeks, Melinda noticed her breasts continuing to grow. It was more pronounced over time as she eventually was embarrassed by how much space there was bowing outward between her buttons. She even resorted to borrowing tops from Holly.
I don’t particularly care for the illustrations in The Freshman Fifteen. They’re OK, but the work seems a little hurried – the same artist has done better work before. I’m also a little put off by the more graphic adult content that’s been showing up lately in some of the BE Story Club publications. Maybe it’s just me, but the essence of the stories in the past was just the breast expansion, and now it often seems about the sex, or mind-control or dream sex fantasies. The stories are still good, but are slipping slightly from what I think of when I think about breast expansion.
But if you like graphic sexual stories, then this is a win for you.